tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post6436045793467300368..comments2024-03-28T21:43:42.280-04:00Comments on I'm Living My Words: A Flower Hair ClipBetsy Hubbardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10492340502962987362noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-85834561101257719322014-01-17T06:37:16.473-05:002014-01-17T06:37:16.473-05:00Wow. Bloglovin (replacement for Google reader) sho...Wow. Bloglovin (replacement for Google reader) shows only few first words, so I was not ready to such a change from a sweet little hair clip to your deep going memories. I was already impressed with the first part of your slice, but then there was more masterfully crafted writing. Terjehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13569210226711674834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-45098615778870870482014-01-14T23:52:43.279-05:002014-01-14T23:52:43.279-05:00The first part is so exquisite. The repetition ta...The first part is so exquisite. The repetition takes me deeper into the experience. The second part explains where the thoughts came from and makes the piece even more beautiful. Lovely, Betsy.writekimwritehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02910094603036735657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-53089924083545119592014-01-14T19:38:41.808-05:002014-01-14T19:38:41.808-05:00Betsy, you crafted this piece so beautifully. It ...Betsy, you crafted this piece so beautifully. It tugs at my heart in all the right places, makes me smile and misty too. It unfolds and wraps around me as I read it. It's lovely, "mostly for it's memory and less for its looks."Robinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01132042235993262800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-405689951425241582014-01-14T18:43:08.415-05:002014-01-14T18:43:08.415-05:00What a beautiful memory that is so touching. The i...What a beautiful memory that is so touching. The introductory materials lead beautifully into the text, almost as if poetry meets prose. Carol Varsalonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02589714711155938528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-12897717638746534942014-01-14T17:29:24.838-05:002014-01-14T17:29:24.838-05:00I love the way you structured this piece, Betsy. T...I love the way you structured this piece, Betsy. The first part is given so much power by the second. Truly a lovely slice.Tarahttp://ateachinglifedotcom.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-34055915340808008432014-01-14T14:59:56.990-05:002014-01-14T14:59:56.990-05:00I'm so overcome by the beauty of this piece. T...I'm so overcome by the beauty of this piece. The poetic flow of the first part and the prose of the second. Plus the message about getting closer to your grandmother even though she's gone. Wow, Betsy.Staceyhttp://raisealithuman.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-37314112334919345152014-01-14T13:11:54.190-05:002014-01-14T13:11:54.190-05:00Just wonderful writing--I love the weft and the wa...Just wonderful writing--I love the weft and the warp as you weave the artifacts into story. Beautiful is so important--so much more important than mere things. Thanks for the reminder and for your words.Lee Ann Spillanehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04650009312001849617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-64844385442684498862014-01-14T11:27:11.406-05:002014-01-14T11:27:11.406-05:00Betsy - this is so beautifully written. Thanks fo...Betsy - this is so beautifully written. Thanks for sharing your memories with us. I just love all of this - brought tears to my eyes and my own memories to my mind. Thank you.Dana Murphyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11074459005471978793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-77768639322419210232014-01-14T08:34:44.238-05:002014-01-14T08:34:44.238-05:00Love this writing for us and the way you led us th...Love this writing for us and the way you led us through to the important part, that memory of your grandmother. Beautiful words, Betsy. And how great an idea about the sharing of a memory. Thank you for taking time to write. LInda Baiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-35811817416060033252014-01-14T06:55:51.218-05:002014-01-14T06:55:51.218-05:00Sounds like your grandmother was with you all day....Sounds like your grandmother was with you all day. Your love for her comes out beautifully in your post.<br>BernadetteBernadette Laganellahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07434499049673670812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-73216768963113948312014-01-14T06:51:41.061-05:002014-01-14T06:51:41.061-05:00Love the poem and the little journey through memor...Love the poem and the little journey through memory that you shared remembering her in your heart.Margaret Simonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-12155164942277185752014-01-14T06:31:37.777-05:002014-01-14T06:31:37.777-05:00Beautiful! Your post reminded me about my grandmot...Beautiful! Your post reminded me about my grandmother's church scarf. Maybe there is a story as well.Jaanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02027755562339582129noreply@blogger.com