tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post3805166037172996264..comments2024-03-28T21:43:42.280-04:00Comments on I'm Living My Words: DandelionBetsy Hubbardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10492340502962987362noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-44317347124592960042013-03-09T01:41:30.453-05:002013-03-09T01:41:30.453-05:00This is a lovely piece! Fitting personification, ...This is a lovely piece! Fitting personification, great assonance in "bathed in rays", and some sweet sneaky rhyme to end the last two stanazs. Nice! :)birdsandtreesofthemindhttp://birdsandtreesofthemind.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-27148293898132304862013-03-08T21:41:15.491-05:002013-03-08T21:41:15.491-05:00I like the way the dandelion tells the story. They...I like the way the dandelion tells the story. They are an intriguing plant, loved by kids, detested by adults.elsiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01348895330633879894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-23346541274235133812013-03-08T21:09:21.812-05:002013-03-08T21:09:21.812-05:00I loved the first poem, A Summer Dandelion. The r...I loved the first poem, A Summer Dandelion. The rhythm and sound of it were enticing. It made me yearn a little more for spring. I also enjoyed the new incarnation of your dandelion. It has a very different feel and rhythm, but also pleasing. It's interesting to see your two poems side by side. Thanks for sharing!Robinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01132042235993262800noreply@blogger.com