tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post6298717324368311428..comments2024-03-28T21:43:42.280-04:00Comments on I'm Living My Words: RevisorBetsy Hubbardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10492340502962987362noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-48378102504259782442012-04-14T12:57:10.871-04:002012-04-14T12:57:10.871-04:00I love "smudge stained prints" and "...I love "smudge stained prints" and "brush away the wrong." I also love the list at the end, though it makes me a little sad that the last line is mistake.Liz Steinglasshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14614059299412727544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-91360822903398921312012-04-04T20:48:31.578-04:002012-04-04T20:48:31.578-04:00This poem is really neat! I read it a couple of t...This poem is really neat! I read it a couple of times to really understand... great for visualizing!Chrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18102939630771341497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-48580746207439840162012-03-21T22:41:36.133-04:002012-03-21T22:41:36.133-04:00I love your writiing. I can see the movie in my m...I love your writiing. I can see the movie in my mind. Great lines, "a reminder, a memory, a mistake". My list might also include: a better way to say the same thing. You've modeled a great way to describe something so simple in action, but more difficult in practice.Valeriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02373919113998181845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-34842305236873651452012-03-09T23:32:29.071-05:002012-03-09T23:32:29.071-05:00I love ambling through the words in your poem. Ve...I love ambling through the words in your poem. Very descriptive.Storykeeperhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13695194443477630515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-36735802778134008312012-03-07T05:36:45.994-05:002012-03-07T05:36:45.994-05:00Love it! I love how the sensory details lead me to...Love it! I love how the sensory details lead me to what's actually happening "the smell of wood chips and rubber blow off the page"... nice!Lee Ann Spillane:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04650009312001849617noreply@blogger.com