tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post8687618035375042171..comments2024-03-26T21:26:15.311-04:00Comments on I'm Living My Words: Lost DogBetsy Hubbardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10492340502962987362noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-66523822827951211482013-11-25T20:27:43.109-05:002013-11-25T20:27:43.109-05:00So scary! Glad your dog returned. :)So scary! Glad your dog returned. :)Staceyhttp://raisealithuman.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-28790168218541420512013-03-29T09:57:06.839-04:002013-03-29T09:57:06.839-04:00I like the way you used both prose and poetry in t...I like the way you used both prose and poetry in this piece, as one compliments and builds on the other. In the prose, I felt the tension build and worried for your dog, for you and your husband. Our pets are like our children, innocent babes. The poem takes on a different tone. We know the dog is found and I imagine you singing this poem to him, telling him of your worry, your love for him. Mardiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12237463317290624819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-51756267819660125802013-03-29T08:28:07.626-04:002013-03-29T08:28:07.626-04:00A time of intense worrying was so clear in the poe...A time of intense worrying was so clear in the poem. I'm glad the calling out stopped, so you knew the lost was found.elsiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01348895330633879894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-13807427040851165522013-03-28T22:54:43.290-04:002013-03-28T22:54:43.290-04:00The fear in the poem is clear, really great wordin...The fear in the poem is clear, really great wording, Betsy. I am sorry you had to go through this, so scary. Even if it was just a few minutes, still, it isn't easy. So happy it has a happy ending!Linda at teacherdancehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-53480887765508508242013-03-28T22:19:09.121-04:002013-03-28T22:19:09.121-04:00Oh no! Glad you found him! I liked the poem a lo...Oh no! Glad you found him! I liked the poem a lot...the repeating line was cool!Robinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01132042235993262800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-52658272237710316502013-03-28T21:40:52.541-04:002013-03-28T21:40:52.541-04:00I was sitting on the edge of my seat...and so reli...I was sitting on the edge of my seat...and so relieved that your dog was found. Phew!Tara @ A Teaching Lifehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07195982194362559883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042407720611831077.post-58733371822543507722013-03-28T21:34:46.310-04:002013-03-28T21:34:46.310-04:00Glad you found poochie! Your post had me worried ...Glad you found poochie! Your post had me worried at first...Amy Ruddhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18177520075043676835noreply@blogger.com