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Tuesday, March 15, 2016

Day 15 of 31 #SOL16

Spring's Arrival

In the quiet, I listen
I think I heard you
you weren't too far away
but too far for my eyes 
to capture your colors

In the mist, I look
I think I saw you
a flash of red and brown
in flight, I strain 
but you are a blur

In the light, I wait
I think I feel you
closer now
I'll patiently await 
your warmth rolling forward








10 comments:

  1. Beautiful imagery - love how each stanza is a different sense. Your poem makes me hopeful for the spring!! Thank you for brightening my evening.
    Clare

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  2. We are getting some very spring-like days of warm sunshine. I noticed the green shoots of daffodils coming up in front of my house= one bud so far, just about to open. Your poem catches the anticipation.

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  3. I loved "your warmth rolling forward." I speaks to nature's cycle and an embrace. Love.

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  4. Your images are beautiful, Betsy. Sometimes it's so hard to wait patiently for the colors and warmth of spring. Thank you for giving us a slice of the season today!

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  5. Your poetry has so much imagery! I can feel the spring around the corner!

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  6. I can sense the promise of spring in your imagery. It's almost here.

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  7. Beautiful Betsy! We were on the same wave length today!

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  8. Your poem makes me anticipate Spring all the more. Love your appeal to the senses and personification.

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  9. Your poem makes me anticipate Spring all the more. Love your appeal to the senses and personification.

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