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Friday, March 23, 2018

Key Turns the Day

Clunk,
Clunk,
Clunk.
Schwit, click
Vvvzzzschmmmmm
Hmmmmmmm...

Blurred trees
slow turns
lights looking for deer.
Occasional jumpy leaves
startle.

Light creeps
in, grays
blue tints
slice between trees
whispering morning.









4 comments:

  1. The imagery here is nice--"blue tints slicing between trees whispering morning." I love that!

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  2. Love the onomatopoeic words and the image of light creating shafts of light, "slice between trees."

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  3. Oooh...such beautiful imagery and terrific onomatopoeia. The poem gave me a little chill!

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  4. What a beautiful glimmer of morning! I love "blurred trees" and "jumpy leaves." Those were especially visual lines for me, and it all came together at the end to complete the picture in my mind. Lovely.

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